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Tomorrow begins National Novel Writing Month; if you’re
reading this blog, I feel pretty safe in assuming you know what that means. If
you don’t, go ahead and do a search for NaNoWriMo and then come back.
For today, I’d simply like to offer a few bits of advice for
using NaNoWriMo to purposefully improve your prose and writing habits.
Focus on one or two
problems: NaNoWriMo is about wordcount, about writing a full 50,000-word
story in a single month. Focusing too hard on the quality of your prose will
probably only inhibit your ability to meet your daily wordcount goals. Let
yourself write quickly and naturally and worry about editing later.
However, NaNoWriMo is also an excellent opportunity to break
one or two bad habits. Go through some of the posts here on the Story Polisher
and pick a problem that I’ve highlighted which you really want to fix. Maybe
you want to fix your punctuation in dialog tags or your misuse of “ing” verbs.
Whatever you pick, watch out for that problem as you’re writing and ignore any
other problems. Fix the problem every
time it pops up, right when you notice it. For the first few days, it will be
difficult and will slow down your writing. But if you keep it up, you’ll catch
the problem more and more quickly each time. Eventually, the daily
reinforcement will wear away old habits and the problem will naturally
disappear from your writing. A little extra effort now will save you a lot of
editing in the years to come.
Don’t wear yourself
out: I love that so many people get excited about NaNoWriMo and gain
motivation from it. But it can also be exhausting and aggravating. December 1st
can be a sorry sight in many writing circles—full of exhausted, over-worked
writers who are so sick of the amount of work that they’ve been doing that none
of them will touch a word processor for another month.
Some people write well in spurts; some people don’t. I used
to write in spurts, but I got very little done because I would wear myself out
or hit a difficult stretch and abandon the story for months at a time.
Eventually I discovered that writing smaller portions on a daily basis was a
much easier and more efficient schedule for me. If you find yourself getting
sick and tired of writing toward the end of November, consider cutting down
your wordcount to something that doesn’t exhaust you and simply continuing your
writing through December and on. 1,600-odd words a day for a month is nice, but
500 to 1,000 words a day for a year is even better. Don’t sour yourself on
writing for the sake of an artificial deadline.
Don’t start editing
on December 1st: When you finish your manuscript, it’s going to
need editing. Every first draft does—so do most second and third drafts. For
the publication-minded writer, eager to submit a new story to an editor as soon
as possible, it can be very tempting to turn around the moment that you’re
finished with the first draft and begin editing. Don’t do it!
You’ve just spent a whole month in close contact with that
story—you are closer to it than you are to your clothing. When you’re too close
to the story, your mind automatically fills in gaps in the logic of the
narrative and glosses over errors. Your head is full of what you meant to say, and so it becomes unable
to notice what you’ve actually said.
Take a few weeks off, at the very least. Maybe even a whole
month or more. Let that intimate familiarity with the story fade away—if there’s
changes that you’re afraid you’ll forget to make, jot down some detailed notes
before you leave the story. Then, come back when the story is once again
somewhat unfamiliar to you. You’ll find it far easier to notice errors, gaps in
logic, or less-than-stellar dialog and prose. And since the story won’t be so
close to your heart anymore, you’ll find it easier to ruthlessly cut out the
darlings that need to be cut.
I know far too many writers who have burnt themselves out
over NaNoWriMo or have become caught in endless, ineffective editing loops
because they didn’t want to leave the story until it was finished and polished.
Be careful—don’t let yourself fall into these traps! Happy NaNoWriMo, and good luck.
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